E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

Structure:

L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.

Indicators:

• Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
• Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
• Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures

Indicators:

• Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
• Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

• Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
• Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

Simple sentences - green

Compound sentences - yellow

Complex sentences - light blue

The add just stoped and my best friend Ricky started to go to sleep.

Just as she was a monkey called Emma came and began same food

She asked us if we wanted anything to eat "No thank you " I said

.But my friend Ricky said "I will have chicken soup please"sure

thing Emma said "thank you"Ricky said. "I need to go to the

toilet " and i passed my favourite you tuber APHMAU!!!

WEEK 6 REFLECTION

What Learning did you find challenging this week?

My writing and try to get it finished in time.

How did you use a growth mindset to overcome these learning challenges?

I will try to keep on trying to finish it.

What is the piece of the work you are most proud of this week?

My writing.

Why are you proud of it?

Because I thing I'm getting better at it.

Week 5 Reflection

WEEK 5 REFLECTION

What Learning did you find challenging this week?

 Writing.

How did you use a growth mindset to overcome these learning challenges?

I try doing the things that I was bad at.

What is the piece of the work you are most proud of this week?

My and my writing.

Why are you proud if it?

Because I am improving my work.

ADD EVIDENCE OF THE WORK YOU ARE PROUD OF.

Giving Quality feedback

GIVING QUALITY FEEDBACK

WHY IS IT IMPORTANT TO COMMENT ON PEOPLES BLOGS?

So they can improver on what they are doing.

What is the FIRST step in giving feedback?

To tall them what you like about it.    

Why is it important to follow this step?

Because  the other prison  that writing this needs to improver.

Do I have to use this every time?

 maybe?

What is the SECOND step in giving feedback?

ask the blogger a question.

Why is it important to follow this step?

so the person know what the blogger is talking 
 about.

Do I have to use this every time?

No, I must choose between this step and giving feedback depending on the person I am commenting on.

What is the THIRD step in giving feedback?

give the blogger a positive surgeon  

Why is it important to follow this step?

so the blogger now know what he or she can do next time.

Do I have to use this every time?

No, I must choose between this step and asking a question depending on the person I am commenting on.

WHY IS IT IMPORTANT TO GIVE QUALITY FEEDBACK.
because he or she can improve there blog.

Connect Reflection

CONNECT REFLECTION - WEEK 1

What does our new value - CONNECT - mean?

connect with the people around us.

How have you Connected this week?  Remember to show evidence, actual times and how.

well i guess by having fun with my new friends and finding
out abut them.

How could you become better at this value?
by getting to know the other kids in my class.

CAMP - Living Springs

LIVING SPRINGS CAMP

1 Who did you share a bunk room with?

Emma,Molly,Ellie frost,Ellie green grass,Isla,Temperance.         

2 What was your favourite rotation activity? (Describe the activity)

the brush waked its like this big long waked throw same brush and we learn
about the trees and the birds and what Maori people  the trees for.

3 Why?

because its cool to know what the Maori used it for because
I mind need to know this in the future 

4 What two school values did you show

connect and reflect .

5 How?

I connected with my room mates and I did something bad and I reflect on my
actions 

6 What was the best part of camp for you?

sleep.

7 Why?

because I was tried and we need our sleep or we would 
anger. 

INSERT PHOTOS (SEVERAL!!!)

INSERT POEM (NEXT WEEK)


That was: camp
Remember when we heard the birds singing
and chirping in the trees.
Remember the trees and leaves we learnt about.
That was the bush walk.

Remember when had to put on bandannas so we couldn't see.
Remember when we had to hold onto the rough ropes
give you blisters.
That the Burma trail

Remember when we saw Evie some of us got to milk her.
Do you remember when got to go on the carriage and we got to feed the donkey.
That was the farm park.

CHILDRENS DAY

CHILDRENS DAY 2018

What were the best parts of Childrens Day?

making sand castles with my Bud.

Why?

   because it was fun to build it and get same ides for it.

What Values did you use/show at Childrens Day?

create

How?

because me and my bud create a snack sand castles.